I love it! it sounds like something out of a published book! i definitely read it if i saw it at the library. Is this the very beginning of the first chapter? it sounds more like it belongs in the second or third chapter after you've had both characters developed more so we are more emotionally invested in solara when she says she's preggo so we are more impacted by it. but again i love this book so far and now im kinda sad i have to leave without knowing what happens to her :( *sighhh*
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